Sunday, October 24, 2010

Etsy shop critique - Jarg0n

Etsy shop critique for Jarg0n

First look - wow. What a great shop. Great banner, avatar, pictures, colorful, eye catching... but...

Second look - I didn't know you have these beautiful crochet doilies!  I wouldn't expect it in your shop. Post them in the featured items.
and more pictures. Why don't you use all 5 spots? Show me how to use them, on a piece of furniture, from a farther distance. 

And what is this?

A bag? I've never seen something like that. This is GORGES!!!  How do I use this kind of bag? Show me, pictures, pictures.... I don't know if I would pay $59 for this bag. But maybe I would if you convince me :o) 

And other, other surprises - hats, gorges, all the cutE animals wow ....  cross stitch? an other surprise....

Ok, now you don't have policy - a big no, no! You have to have policy! 
How about your facebook and blog, or website? .... post it under your profile, so people can find you. 

Overal great shop!  Unique and great items.

Have you ever thought about selling a tutorial? I think a tutorial for one of your crocheted animals for e.g. $5 would bring traffic to your shop. I know it's a lot of work on the beginning, but  than you can sell it over and over...

Would you consider to contribute to this blog? Tutorial for a small crocheted ornament (maybe a star), or show us how you create one of your items .... Remember the blog articles are picked by Google and show on one of the first pages.  

Good luck! 

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